There's also the "go to your closet" line, which is pitch-perfect delivery.

YES. She's awkward and bossy at the same time - or rather, falling back on "bossy" to cover the awkwardness. The fact that she blames herself for her own visceral reaction when he touches her is also kind of poignant and sad, but then there's that funny line, and on we go.

except EP which I loved before the revision.

Which version is the shooting script on buffyworld - I haven't read it - , and who did the revision?

I love SMG's bangs hair in that ep so much it's ridiculous btw.