ext_10494 ([identity profile] the-royal-anna.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] red_satin_doll 2013-03-23 01:19 pm (UTC)

I've not seen The Hours, but found this a lovely read all the same. I love the precision of the detail, and the way it sets up what unfolds - the contrast between the careful observation and the breathless uncertainty, all that unspilt emotion, is so effective.

“Silly contraptions” a voice laughed lightly – and Laura could breathe. She could breathe.

Oh! The repeated line there is such a delightful touch. Three words that sum up everything - and told in a rhythm that exactly reflects that out-take of breath.

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