Oh, beautiful. I don't have much words, especially when I read something that impresses me and I'm not so good at expressing my thoughts in English, but I really loved this fic. It's so perfect. I love the beginning, the descriptions of the room, the smells and the colours - I really adore descriptive narrative, it's slow and makes everything more realistic. And I like how you managed to put together the shadow of Virginia and Laura, who is struggling to embrace life. I really like the language and the punctuation too. I'm starting to learn who it works in English and I really like the rythm in this story. I loved The Hours and I think it's difficult to write a fanfic about something so beautiful and also complete, but you did it.
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I don't have much words, especially when I read something that impresses me and I'm not so good at expressing my thoughts in English, but I really loved this fic. It's so perfect. I love the beginning, the descriptions of the room, the smells and the colours - I really adore descriptive narrative, it's slow and makes everything more realistic. And I like how you managed to put together the shadow of Virginia and Laura, who is struggling to embrace life. I really like the language and the punctuation too. I'm starting to learn who it works in English and I really like the rythm in this story.
I loved The Hours and I think it's difficult to write a fanfic about something so beautiful and also complete, but you did it.